>>1900181>>1900321You know, you're honestly right. It may not have been the worst way I could have handled it, but it probably can be handled better. I still think some words between the girls are important. Thoughts and feelings I think are a big part of this genre (to me personally at least, I know others feel differently). However, I don't need to do quite that much text in the forefront. I sort of was hoping to avoid a "5 minutes later" type thing too. This time I'm trying something else again, hopefully it works out better.
