Any critiques for this? If I was trying harder I would have avoided that guy in the background and also that umbrella hat, but I actually like the lighting and composition aside from that. I bumped the brightness up a bit but other than that didn't touch it. You guys can edit the RAW if there's anything you want to try (I might do a crop, but I don't really know if that would help at all). Thanks!
RAW File (In NEF Format; sorry if that's cumbersome, I just got my first DSLR and am grappling with file formats):
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-LB1Q_VEgJ2UUc3dUtUTDA5cXM/view?usp=sharing