>>3455187 (OP)Ruined with shitty editing. Model also looks constipated. Your focus is also off
At least look into frequency separation
>>3455201Looks like a badly compressed jpeg
>>3455229(You)
>>3455466Actually a good shot with particularly good light. I'd like a catch light and the editing on her face looks particularly fucked, and her hair is both a mess and unedited but if you processed this properly you'd have a great portfolio shot
>>3455541Another badly compressed jpeg, are these a joke? The light is boring, the focus is TERRIBLE and editing is also visibly fucked- it looks like it's been passed through a cheap phone filter