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Nothing engaging about this photo-it looks really boring. There’s a big black sky with nothing in it, and nothing catches my eye in the composition. The composition is lackluster, and so is the editing; stylistically, it’s unappealing.
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Nothing’s going on. What am I supposed to look at? Debris?
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The framing is, again, not interesting. I also don’t get why you included those random objects hanging from the top. Also, the flour doesn’t stand out. You could have used a small light to make the flour pop, or drawn the lighting in Photoshop with a soft light layer.
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Nothing interesting is going on. I assume the plant is the main subject, but its visual weight is weak, making the composition unbalanced and chaotic. Also, using this long focal length with the heavy blur to make the plant stand out more feels beginner-like.
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The tunnel is cool. At least give a reward at the end-place yourself or a friend at the end of the tunnel. That would have made the composition feel somewhat nice. Also, I’m not a fan that you again used a lot of black around the frame. It’s like you can’t commit to the composition.
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This time you actually have an engaging main subject-power lines, so that’s cool. But everything around it is boring. The shed to the left looks cluttered and boring. The mountains seem like they are just placed wherever; they’re not guiding the viewer through the composition.
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I guess this is an alright photo. You used high contrast with high clarity, which creates a highly stylistic look. However, the background blur is distracting, and the two dots on the right are also distracting. The photo lacks any kind of story-it’s just “here’s the animal’s head.” It doesn’t feel like you made this photo with intention or a specific mood you wanted to convey.
