>>58630002>>58630804>ignore this oneErr, sure. I just figured the directions in the dream would lead to IRL directions for Copanon to follow, but whatever you say I suppose.
>>58631667On one hand, this presents somewhat of a conundrum. The doctors are going to want to know what the sam-Hell happened to cause such injuries, but if Copanon just says it was "a Pokemon", continuing to try and maintain Fedorark's cover, that may draw far too much unwanted attention to his home.
On the other hand, seeing what's happening at the local hospital would be incredibly interesting. One fun thing you could do is have a Garganacl repairing injuries by sprinkling salt on them, surrounded on all sides by flummoxed medicos collectively scratching their heads.
>>58631713Oh hey, a tense snarl. "I would sit" should be "I sat".
>Absol is greasyGross, dude. Clearly disaster doggo needs a bath.
>The replaceShould be "To replace"
Yeaaah, I don't think that good 7th day is gonna happen , mate. Poor fucker.
>>58628382Yeah, pretty much. If my commentary ever feels random and pointless, it was probably because I was struggling to come up with something other than, "yep, it's good".
As far as Matsui goes, if having her stay gone and leaning into the road trip feel where Val experiences many different shenanigans rather than one consistent one, and we focus more on the progression of his mental state, proves to be the natural progression for your story, then do that and we'll just rename the story. I did mention before that the two didn't feel as if they had particularly great chemistry.
