>>54152734Good story. I think you describe Chespin and Toge's reactions and thoughts well. It all feels believable and realistic. I also like that you give specific examples of the things Chespin and Wooper have done together, which makes his sadness hit harder, since the reader gets an idea of what Chespin is missing. Also, his friendship with Toge is adorable, and the
Wooper costume scene made me laugh.
Of course, I've gotta nag you about the inconsistent line spacing, as I have before. Not sure what you mean about rentry not liking spacing between paragraphs; I don't think I've ever had trouble with that. Aside from the spacing, though, no issues stood out to me.
>>54154541A very sad story, but you did a good job describing the situation and his reaction. Loredump was interesting too. I think it would be neat if you made that part canon.
>>54153853I can definitely see Booker being the Magician, but I'm not sure if Sneasel works as the High Priestess.
I was thinking Booker/Sneasel both would work as the Lovers, since it symbolizes partnership, and they're definitely close partners
and slowly becoming actual lovers. Cooper could be Wheel of Fortune, since it represents change and luck--he's certainly had some major upheavals in his life, and also got lucky to end up at the guild and meet
his doppelganger. And then Testa could be the Sun, since it represents happiness and positivity, and she's quite optimistic and friendly.
>>54153860I'd probably put everyone in hard or very hard--but that's because I'm still learning to draw.
>>54153867Seems accurate for my guys.
>>54156050Looks cool, despite being sketchy.
>>54157761>Booker: nervous, afraid of being squished by accident>Sneasel: swat the hand away>Cooper: a bit flustered and uncomfortable>Testa: she'd enjoy it and return the favor 