>>57619662hah, i did say i'd give my reviews for the new stories, but i guess merry and louis will have to wait a little longer
I really like how you establish oricorio's personality off the bat like that, the fletchinder bit makes me think she must be a bit of a diva, and i love that, i also think you did a great job weaving a backstory and lore for its forms and dance routines! dunno who's my fave between her and fuecoco. i'm too braindead atm to articulate why, but for whatever reason ceniza's got a really clear voice in my head, so we'll just chalk it up to your dialogue being very fun, especially with how open she is about her busy lifestyle! her story with trigo also adds another interesting facet to her character, and i like that you integrated the team star stuff into her lore. i also enjoy how you lean into jacques as an intimidating sort of character! you describe battles with a lot of care, and i think it helps make them feel bouncy and frenetic, as a fight should be! that said, those non-verbal cues are really stealing bibi's style, get your own material jacques (just kidding, it's a good way to make him feel more sly). i didn't get to comment as much, but i really like your new additions to the cenizaverse and i'm glad we get to see the comparatively cool escarcha bounce off our leading lady. lovely work bro!>>57619741counting on you to keep me fed with your pop art influences mans
