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I'm having a few problems and I want your guys' opinions since you're my primary audience these days.
I want to do more than just "have two characters rub against each other" because I don't want to be "surpassed" in fucking smut ability anymore. I want to be better than that.
At the same time, though, having two characters mash nasties for 2 paragraphs is pretty much all I know how to do (with 'know how to do' being subjective depending on who you ask). When I try to add story to things, it's either long and drawn-out or just a small excuse to make things flow to sex. It's how the 2nd Roxie story and the Nurse Joy story are starting to look.
I thought I fixed it with my Duplica story, and I didn't. I thought I was beginning to fix it again with Crazy Serena, and I'm not.
What can I do to make them something everyone would like?
