>>58608346I'm so glad to hear that! Glad I took my time on it, seems have paid off.
I did see that and corrected it. I have no fucking idea why it did that. It's not like that in my word document so it must've screwed up when I uploaded.
>the dragon might be my favorite character thoughReally? I'm actually surprised by that lol. As I was writing I was super worried it was coming out cringy and too anime. Good to know.
>good work with the uncertaintyI'm so glad that I did good with that! It was hard to know if I was drawing it out a bit too much or if it was just the right amount of will he/won't he.
Thank you for the critiques and your previous ones. I've only been able to write this good thanks to your input. So, so glad that it appears to be paying off. Your help has been invaluable and I thank you for sticking with it through the more rougher parts of it so I could improve.