>>65248360This was super cute! I love my dorky over-polite samurai. I think you captured Iroha's personality pretty well, and the budding relationship you drew between anon and her was adorable and made the things she was struggling to say even better. I would say that your scenes could use a little more flowering to them. While the subject is easy to grasp and enjoy, there's a lot of potential to have it resonate even more, feel more beautiful, and just whisk the reader into Iroha's apartment for lovey dovey dorky Christmas Eve SEX!
