>>1737661Again, I need a link to the original so I can compare your work to what it should actually look like. The higher resolution is nicer, but 150 PPI is still low. Export at a minimum 300 PPI.
Thickness is all over the place. Hair is thick on the braiding and right side, while the left side is much thinner. The inner lines for the hair are much thinner than the outer lines. The clothes over the breasts are much thinner than the tied part. The fingers and her left arm are much thicker than her right arm and back. Pick thicknesses for each section of the drawing (hair, clothes, skin, etc.) and make every line in that section the same size. For the hair, make every other hair line the same thickness as the braided part. For the skin, make every other skin line the same thickness as her left arm. For the clothes, make every other clothes line the same thickness as the tied part. You also want to make sure all your nodes and handles are parallel.
As for the coloring, making everything a blur does not make the image look better. You also bloat the size heavily (you effectively doubled the size for little to no gain), and make the image far from an actual vector. The original hard shadows looked just fine. If you are going to use blurs, you need to make clipping masks, because you have blurs peeking everywhere. The tutorials in the OP address this.
