>>1743375>>1743516Yeah, it's a great song. Glad you guys like it.
>>1743448Looks fine, if not a bit plain. I feel as though adding/removing things will ruin it, though.
>>1743449The spacing on the clock just looks odd because it's not a monospace font; it looks better at different times. I wanted to avoid using some symbol there this time but I might switch it up.
Also I can see your ME!ME!ME! inspiration pretty clearly, but you could've chosen a better image. Pic related :^).
>>1743490Clock looks really chunky and out of place and the icons bar is detracting from the wallpaper. Maybe get rid of the upper bar and move the icons up there?
>>1743540Really neat, Anon, I like it. Is Yu-Gi-Oh YGOPro?
>>1743567Clock on the left screen should probably be at the top, and possibly bigger. Also Maki looks like she was scaled weirdly. Nice otherwise.
>>1743632I think your layout fits the wallpaper, but I don't really like the wallpaper.
>>1743698The banner is too short and the icons are hard to see on that colour. I'd suggest using a colour from her hair for the banner with white icons, and maybe putting something up the top too.
>>1743304Still looking for critiques. I know it can be better.
