>>1737119>>1737120You have a lot of inconsistencies in your lineart. Don't follow so closely to the original lineart. Pick a thickness for each section of the image like hair, skin, clothes, etc. and keep it consistent within each section. You also have a lot of areas where it is very clear your nodes are uneven, such as at the elbows, the folds in the clothing, the triangle shapes on the clothing, and in the hair. Make your nodes parallel in terms of placement and handles at all times to fix this issue.
As for coloring, it is a major downgrade from the original. The skin is very pale, the clothes are too dark, and the highlights and base colors on the hair are too contrasting. Even though the coloring from the original is a little faded, it is much closer to what it should look like. Go back to those colors, and make small edits to the HSB scale to make it a little better.
Last thing you should do is finish the top of the finger and the hair. It should be very simple to do both parts, since a majority of it is already drawn for you and you have references within the original image that can help you with both parts. You just have to follow the lines, sort of like what you did for the elbow
