>>1738664Eyes are much better now. However, you need to make a decision with the hair. The original is a little weird, where the major hair V does not actually go over the eye and has no color priority, while the smaller V to the right of it actually does, and has color priority over the eyes. Make a personal decision to either have the major V go over the eye with color priority, or have it not go over the eye like in the original. You should also keep all the hair lines the same color instead of making the one over the eye different, since it looks out of place right next to all the other hair lines. You also need to make a decision with the eye fold right above her right eye. You have it above one of the hair lines and below the other. Decide if you want it above or below overall, and layer it accordingly, or make it the same color.
As for the rest of the errors, there is a lot of color peeking or disconnected lines. Everytime you finish a vector, get in the habit of making a square behind the vector with a bright contrasting fill (light green usually works well). This makes it much easier to see disconnected lines and color peeking and you should do this for every major vector as a last final step to clean up errors.
There are still other line errors, but by this point you have done enough. You will only improve by moving on and applying these on new vectors. Do a couple more and I probably won't have to crush your dreams anymore.
