>>16242505It is I, behold.
Now before i say anything, both tests are just first drafts, so that should be kept in mind.
Now...
>but I assume it is mentioned somewhere earlierYes, thats one of the general terms in the setting.
>objects like corridors can't accompany youI guess it's a polish think, so here it's more of a translation thing.
>Next, if someone is ahead of you, most likely you are the one who remaineduhhhhh well i guess so
>Too many uses of the word group, seems a bit sillyI wanted to change it to some platoon or something, but these are not, well platoons so it was kinda 'being in hurry' thing. I hate repetitions in almost all instances so thats the first.
No, no, as someone who has no idea what to say in situations such as these, you are doing very well. I appreciate it.
