>>10958381I have the story almost completely write now but I have to create and specifie scenes to make the plot moves forward.
The story transcur from the year 640 to the 666 and is about a mage from egypt named Attepnipse that is trying to stop a witch named Seru Güiran from invoking a interdimentional reptilian beign with godlike powers wich serü wants to use to make a new messiah and thus make a religion to create a new world order.
I im trying not to fall into the typical "shonen" like structure that I have seen duplicated a lot in south American comics