>>7056385Thanks, I guess it’s understandable for someone who isn’t really used to English literature and language to get confused by it. I wasn’t trying to tell a straight forward story as much as a metaphorical and dreamlike psychological analysis of the characters, it is not meant to be realistic but like a dream because I wanted to capture how our minds work; I used a lot of the stream of consciousness technique do it, as well as relying highly on symbolism. I am mostly inspired by modernist writers like Joyce and Proust.
I see the world in a haze so I tried to capture that.
I am glad you read the thing, and at least liked parts of it, thank you for taking notice of my work.
