>>14684137>The comparison feels a bit overdone and you could replace it with something more original.Well it was in moment of mc's sorrow so i though it was appropriate but i see your point, especially without any context.
>While it is functional it's also a bit too formulaicWell that was the point of painting her as a divine being. Usual dialogue is done normally.
Also well, it was machine translated so...
And no, i always welcome the critique.