>>14877999Ok so i gave it to 4 different people
1.friend that started writing like maybe 2 years ago because of mine influence and already finished first book... A hack through and through but at least he did something.
Well he got lost midway.
2.Grandma said that there were many unsolved mysteries but thats about it really.
3.Mom didn't read it so yea
4.Other friend read the beginning and said that he would need time for that one.
Sooo yea i decided to just start doing the second version before all 4 read it, because it seems to be the only right move right now.
