>>12367898one can only hope
well i won't provide feedback since we're in the same class level when there are a bunch of people way higher than both of us and i'm not very active there, so it might be a bit presumptuous for me to chime in anyway.
it's pretty awful though. really clear that he just wrote down his whole script in english then tried to translate it without checking anything. lot of phrases that don't really make sense in japanese i think like "i saw my family" and spelling/conjugation mistakes galore.
at one point he says "sometimes over spring break, there is a park and i listen to music" and i just haven't the slightest clue how he arrived at that. i can only assume he means "i went to a park and listened to music" but how he got the verbs and tenses entirely wrong is beyond me
>>12367904i'm no half measure taker
but previews are bad in general
weird faces are her specialty
