>>10952280...
I think I had a wrong approach, I just wrote and didn't think of elipses throwbacks foreshadowing, nothing
I should first think of a good story, write down highlits, plan developement, emotions and stances, how much misleading I want to be in certain parts and how much I want to make mc ignorrant for a better plot twist (should he let plot unravel on it's own despite being able to intervene? or should he be unaware of whats happening? why not a little bit of both? but then what if I'm cramming too much at a time creating a too dense to read book?)
I overhyped it and it's my fault, it's like making a riff that intrigued few people and only later coming to terms I should probably learn music theory before I finish the song
>also also, don't get mad buuuuut....my plants... they increased in numbers, like I spend much more time tending for such a wide arrange of plants that it's honestly exhausting despite the fact I could've invested that time in uni and maybe succeeded (but I just feel nothing for the uni, I outright hate it, and just like I never watered mom's oleander until I planted a ginger corm in it's pot I just don't want to waste my time and effort on that dreck)
>>10952369god fucking damnit, now I can't get that koi tattoo over my thigh that I always wanted, first the dragon now this?
I mean I know it's pretentious but having yakuza-related tattoos as a gaijin is often seen as a faux pas in nipland, right?