>>13229613What the fuck that was actually good anon. I would change the 4chan slang to something more formal, but it's fun the way it is. I would have added two or three more pages at the end to show that the protagonist really means it or something like this anon here said
>>13229614 cause it was a bit too sudden, but great 1st chapter, 8.5/10.
Lol, look at the captcha I got