>>11607132You just don't get it... Forbidden love is among the hottest kinds there are. If you want it to sell, you should remember that.
>that's genre fictionIt's present in more than just that. The love triangle is a good example, and is used pretty frequently outside tacky novels. But at that point of course it'll be more like a novel, which you said you weren't going for. I guess you should keep it relatively simple anyway if this's your first go, but I'd like to see something more than just sm*t too.
>isn't Luna herself a bit overdesigned?She is a princess, after all. Some frills are to be expected. I like the casual look they give her sometimes more, though - like in the one I showed you where she has glasses.
>for youEhh... I don't like the style very much, but I do like the idea behind. Remember what I told you about hot water turning them back to normal? Well, that's where that scene is from... Anyway, I personally prefer more cartoony styles like this one.
>>11607284Maybe you didn't notice, but I was talking to you up there
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