>>11606749It does... It's appealing for a number of reasons too. Like, it may be corny, but it shows that love is possible even for someone who thought it wasn't. The dude can't be too special, though, or it'll be unrealistic. You could also make him similar to her in that way, so it's like they're only letting their guard down with each other.
>I wouldn't be able to write many such scenesWon't that make them more memorable, though? Better to have a couple good scenes than a bunch of mediocre ones. I know that's what I would want in a story like this. But other readers might want more bang (heh) for their buck, so you'd have to balance it.
>what would the reason be?The other not showing enough interest anymore, for example. I guess I think it's romantic because someone who was wronged in love by ending up with the wrong person is righted by finding one who's better for them, but this only applies when they're actually in love with the cheater...
>>rivalryWe're talking about fiction, though. Of course IRL it's gonna be painful for those inolved, but it's been a part of the genre for as long as it's been a thing, and there's a reason for that.
It's nice... That underwear of her's only confirms that she's a thot, though. Check out this Luna. The detail on the eyes and stuff is something else.