>>13665905>the work is fine the way it isno its not fine, I've proved it in a rational and understandable fashion and your response is HURRR ITS ALL FINE. Then you have proven nothing. Its crap. The ball is on your court. If you are really a man, then explain it to us. Take your balls and actually refute what I said instead of DURRR YOU ARE DUMB
>>13665907yes exactly, your characters, creations that exists only on your mind, won't leave you, that's obvious. But if you were to do real work, like in the real world, you wouldn't last a second. And its not me, dozens of people here, on the 8 and other boards have told you many times how to do better but you just disregard it because, again, you are a child. A coward that will keep his creations on his own mind because he is to scared to face reality and being judged by others
>also your broken english is showing even worst than mine, I don't know if you are drunk or whatever but seriously, how can you have a straight face to criticize others writing? you can't even do that right 
