>>15272523Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Sooooooo I'm not an expert in fact this is my first time doing it
The whole thing is wow as in you really put some thoughts and had to think about it but the beginning feels like something I would drop immediatly and it has the family-relationship thingies. I was expecting something like a group of friends perhaps or even just one char or max 2-3.
Also I'm curious what made you wrote about this thing ^_^ I mean the paid whore stuff
I don't see any repetation so this is a goode thing
Part 2 comes so sudden, the forester situation is unclear
And am I a boomer for understanding that lame joke kek? Didn't make me laugh but I understood it
And my motif got butchered :C I was expecting more focus on it I guess
It is goode writing
P.S: I wrote so much till now only to notice that you said >done about half of this
Ok I'm waiting the second part where the motif kicks in I guess, something has to happen
Also >Ansatsu Kyoushitsu, based
Small note: It would be lame if the secret is found out so I hope you're not focusing on that hehe
Wonder what the other romanian thinks about it
