>>22287584I listened it, I think it's good, your 2 solos (in the middle and in the end) weren't bad too. I don't understand a lot about music myself so I can't say anything very constructive, but with my lay knowledge I think I can say that you're in a good path.
>I don't mind criticism I just don't want to be too personal on hereIt's a pretty good reason too. Since you said the lyrics were a bit edgy, I imagine you expressed your feelings about something in it. I could realize the "dekinai" in the chorus, which apparently has to do with not being able to do something. Since I don't want to leave an impression of falseness here by saying only good things, I think I can say that I didn't like how much time was spent repeating "dekinai" in the chorus. Not that it was a mistake, I just found it a bit slow.
