>>2660503your anatomy isnt horrible but your pencil work is all feathered (you clearly traced a line back and forth quickly in short sharp strokes rather than making one long stroke) so it looks messier than it has to. but shockingly, despite your anime head and messy linework none of her bones seem broken, her posture is mostly natural (mostly) and even the hands are pretty good. really the only major complaints i have is her face/head, it's anime and anime is bad but also the nose makes no sense and the hair/rabbit ears seem unnatural. the cow lick may may also needs to end.
but on the whole you may have some [spoiler:lit]talent[/spoiler:lit] for drawing, keep it up and don't listen to /ic/ and don't read loomis loomis is shit. just work on pencil handling technique and maybe use a bigger canvas or proper non-lined paper in the future.
