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>>3287061
please don't ask me that question it's too painful if I could even feel pain anymore I've lived in pain for so long it just feels dull to me

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:M+m0l4Rz Mon 11 Dec 2017 18:57:29 No.3287119 Report

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>>3287061
>romania

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:ZJAqtlTI Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:02:59 No.3287168 Report

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>>3287094
Why would you do this?

Anonymous

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Anonymous ID:Mz0j1KsL Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:06:12 No.3287192 Report

Quoted By: >>3287519

>>3287042
Could you make the text even smaller next time? It was almost readable.

You clearly are just brainstorming so I don't have a lot to add but here's a few notes:

- If you don't want to add details to something just don't mention it. There's no need to spend an entire paragraph just to tell the reader to imagine it for itself.

- Atlas' dad is called Dad? Really?

- Whys is Dad concerned about the storms?

- The way Atlas stands up to Tsunami was just too dramatic.

I'm not a writer so don't take this too seriously

Anonymous

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Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:30:12 No.3287412 Report

Quoted By: >>3287437

>>3287092

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:hJogejgd Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:32:55 No.3287437 Report

Quoted By: >>3287469

>>3287412
are you a writing major?

Anonymous

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Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:37:23 No.3287469 Report

Quoted By: >>3287484 >>3287518 >>3287808

Also, this is unrelated, but can anyone come up with an elder god tier villain who is a pedophile in a realistic setting?

I cannot think of one, cause if you boil down the reasons someone would be a pedophile, it's hard to find a justifiable one. There's pleasure, which isn't really justifiable. Maybe the child is evil for some reason, but if that were the case it would be easier to kill it I don't know how being a pedophile helps.

>>3287437
no

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Mz0j1KsL Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:39:01 No.3287484 Report

Quoted By: >>3287497

>>3287469
Give the villain a backstory where it is heavily sexually abused as a child.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:40:19 No.3287497 Report

Quoted By: >>3287542

>>3287484
That doesn't make it right to have sex with kids. There's a few cheating ways to do it, by making the heroes motivations so terrible that even a pedophile would be better, but that doesn't improve the pedophile at all.

Anonymous

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Anonymous ID:S134uGvG Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:42:25 No.3287512 Report

Quoted By: >>3287522

>>3287042
wew that first paragraph wasn't particularly encouraging to read more desu

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:tDGZv68C Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:42:46 No.3287518 Report

Quoted By: >>3287540

>>3287469
>elder god tier: villian whose motives are hard to find fault in and arguably better than the hero's.
I don't think a pedophile can be just.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:el9xHOa4 Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:43:00 No.3287519 Report

Quoted By: >>3287542

>>3287192
I would gladly call my son Dad. That's like 20 years of dad jokes and confused strangers. Plus his 20 years of "hi hungry, I'm Dad" and shit.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:44:29 No.3287522 Report

Quoted By: >>3287539

>>3287512
i might change it out for this paragraph, time will tell:

>Atlas and his father lived in a straw hut on the edge of town, which his Dad explained would stand up well against windstorms. Atlas wasn't sure who to believe, the tale of the three little pigs, or his father, but the money they saved on rent by living like industrious swine meant they could afford delivery food every meal so he didn't question the logic of the straw hut very much.
>They were eating take-out sushi for breakfast off a rudimentary table, of four legs and a square wooden sheet on top. And what a rudimentary table it was! There were no chairs around the table, they merely sat cross legged in the clean dirt (they had washed the dirt upon moving in to allow them to eat without getting their work and school clothes soiled). Despite all this, Atlas deliberately wore a dour face on his skull. And his father knew that his son would need some exposition or else he would have no idea what is going on. His son was smart, but he had a curious way of being unaware or uninterested in the most basic of things. He had only recently discovered, for example, the biological reason behind separation of the female and male washrooms.

hope i correctly put all that in green or else it will look stupid

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:IuU/ExBG Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:44:30 No.3287523 Report

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>>3287042
desu dont feel like reading all that

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:S134uGvG Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:46:35 No.3287539 Report

Quoted By: >>3287564

>>3287522
Dude it doesn't matter. Your average sentences are unironically way too long. Did you read that shit out loud to yourself? Gives you a better idea of how the text flows

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:46:45 No.3287540 Report

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>>3287518
Probably not, but I won't give up so easily. More of a thought experiment than anything else, but it would be neat if you could come up with a reasonable, realistic justification for their actions.

Anonymous

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Anonymous ID:Mz0j1KsL Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:46:56 No.3287542 Report

Quoted By: >>3287557 >>3287559

>>3287519
I think that would your son commit suicide eventually.

>>3287497
I got your point but it's never right for anyone to have sex with kids. The only other way that I can see it forgivable is if the villain isn't able to distinguish a child from someone older. Like giving the villain some sort of mental problem.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:48:40 No.3287557 Report

Quoted By: >>3287571

>>3287542
No, that's just understanding the motivations of the pedophile, I'm looking for agreement, like if you were presented with the reason he was molesting kids, you'd be like:

>wow, given that, it would be wrong not to molest them, I think

Could such a reason exist?

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:el9xHOa4 Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:48:50 No.3287559 Report

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>>3287542
Nah dude, it's going to be fun times and shit.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:tDGZv68C Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:49:35 No.3287564 Report

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>>3287539
He loses arguments to 17 year old prostitutes; the man is doing the best he can.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Mz0j1KsL Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:50:44 No.3287571 Report

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>>3287557
Sorry, I got nothing.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:53:58 No.3287590 Report

Quoted By: >>3287676 >>3287681

>>3287571
Well perhaps I will go ask reddit. They probably won't know either, but at least they'll get mad.

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Anonymous ID:Mz0j1KsL Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:56:56 No.3287676 Report

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>>3287590

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Anonymous ID:hJogejgd Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:57:44 No.3287681 Report

Quoted By: >>3287692 >>3287776

>>3287590
>They probably won't know either, but at least they'll get mad.
pic related

maybe you should read Lolita

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 19:59:13 No.3287692 Report

Quoted By: >>3287737

>>3287681
I have, and he's nowhere near justifiable. You understand his actions, but you don't agree with them.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:hJogejgd Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:05:13 No.3287737 Report

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>>3287692
and you want to get people to agree with pedophiles when only pedophiles agree with pedophiles...

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Anonymous ID:S134uGvG Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:06:43 No.3287747 Report

Quoted By: >>3288063

Wew son, no, just no. I get that you're going for the whole Pratchett-style lighthearted banter narrator but you're really missing the mark stylewise

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Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:10:49 No.3287776 Report

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>>3287676
>>3287681
fuck this noise I'm going to drink and watch anime instead

Bantime

Bantime ID:qFMbUalr Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:13:29 No.3287808 Report

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>>3287469
Maybe he could have been induced into pedophilia when he was 9, and lusted with a group of youth separat re from the school called Bunnies. The pedophile villain is dead.

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:Zyi2reKB Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:39:50 No.3288063 Report

Quoted By: >>3288108

>>3287747
You could be right, perhaps I should just transfer all my ideas to scripts and just try that instead. My ideas are typically better than my execution enh meh.

or you could be wrong who can say

Anonymous

Anonymous ID:S134uGvG Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:44:21 No.3288108 Report

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>>3288063
I could be wrong. But if you're even half serious about this shit the most wrong thing would be to give up immediately
It is physically impossible to pull literary gold out of your ass after one attempt

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Anonymous ID:HPMhIh2E Mon 11 Dec 2017 20:44:35 No.3288111 Report

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>>3287776

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