>>4675463It's not really an essay though, is it? I understand she's probably young and whatever, but still, don't tell them this is an essay. They'll shit themselves when they come across an actual essay
Also, c'mon dude, I realise you're a fucken sports jock because this MUST be phys ed or something along those lines, but PAY ATTENTION TO THE GRAMMAR. It's important, and she hasn't done great. Just give her feedback on how to fix it up if you're not gonna mark her down for it. Be a useful teacher