>>5751000>«All fine. I was just wondering... how long it would take for my system to blow up, can yours handle all these assets and textures?»can it
bonus: can it handle the stress? (most natural but least specific)
bonus 2: I was just wondering... how long my [system] would last with all these assets and textures
i like what you did with the AI entrance and speech sounds better, couple nitpicky things but im not gonna bore u there
>and another individual with manly featuresand a masculine individual
bonus: she took a quick bow then faded away, only to be replaced by another, more masculine figure
>All of a sudden a female figure with a red V-neck dress appeared in the farthest corner on the left and trotted toward the stage.replace "all of a sudden" with "at the same time"
bonus: she took a quick bow then faded away, a masculine figure materializing to take her place as, in the furthest corner of the stage, another woman* appeared
*idk what to say with this one
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just some random things i noticed that i would change either to sound more native or to be more grammatically chil
