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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:23:59 No.6103807 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>6103826 >>6103910 >>6104014 >>6104038 >>6104705 >>6104741

been trying to write in English, what do you think of my song, is it too cheesy
https://clyp.it/0vizt321

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Anonymous ID:g8RkwnM5 Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:25:31 No.6103821 Report

Quoted By: >>6103836 >>6103838

post the lyrics i aint clicking that shit nigga

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Anonymous ID:uKXk6YkT Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:25:59 No.6103826 Report

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>>6103807
sweet solo my dude

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Anonymous ID:geyF765K Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:26:24 No.6103829 Report

Quoted By: >>6103834

test

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Anonymous ID:g8RkwnM5 Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:26:44 No.6103834 Report

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>>6103829
>gey

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:26:52 No.6103836 Report

Quoted By: >>6103848 >>6103857

>>6103821
its a popular vocaroo like site that doesnt compress the quality to shit

if all we ever went
aint gone much long after that kiss
and if i havent met you
i wouldnt long for you and miss

all those fine and quiet times
when i aint think i needed one
and baby i truly didnt need
ti
til i held your hand with mine

theres been a hole
within my soul
cause since youve gone
my whole world feels alone
its been so long
since weve been wrong

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Anonymous ID:yERl4NCr Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:26:52 No.6103838 Report

Quoted By: >>6103848

>>6103821
Lyrics would be good anyways since its a bit hard to understand at points.

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:28:38 No.6103848 Report

Quoted By: >>6103875

>>6103838
see >>6103836

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Anonymous ID:g8RkwnM5 Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:30:03 No.6103857 Report

Quoted By: >>6103861

>>6103836
It looks good desu. Some parts are a little off grammatically but I personally like lyrics like that as a stylistic choice.

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:31:25 No.6103861 Report

Quoted By: >>6103885

>>6103857
isnt it cheesy as fuck
>a loud soundy "kiss"
>held hands
>fine and quiet nights
>needy

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Anonymous ID:yERl4NCr Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:33:00 No.6103875 Report

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>>6103848
Yeah i saw.
We posted at the exact same time.
It is a bit cheesy for my tastes but i don't like most love/breakup songs so i might be biased.
The guitar is on point though.

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Anonymous ID:g8RkwnM5 Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:34:28 No.6103885 Report

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>>6103861
Eh, I guess; but its not like that's a bad thing desu. People try way too hard to be `avant garde' and `unique' when writing lyrics these days, and it rarely works well.
Personally I don't mind cheesy/cliche lyrics, as long as they sound good in context.
Nothing wrong with feel-good music.

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Anonymous ID:XhTpHJ2D Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:38:04 No.6103910 Report

Quoted By: >>6103955

>>6103807
sounds good to me, song is short tho, would be better if it's a bit longer
keep it up with the good work anon

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:44:46 No.6103955 Report

Quoted By: >>6103973

>>6103910
yeah i made that a month a go and still couldnt take it further

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Anonymous ID:XhTpHJ2D Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:47:20 No.6103973 Report

Quoted By: >>6103995

>>6103955
don't worry about it, it happens, ideas have to come naturally
just don't give up on this
nice dubs btw

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:50:13 No.6103995 Report

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>>6103973
ok i wont give up on it thanks dad

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Anonymous ID:fAihauNH Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:54:03 No.6104014 Report

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>>6103807
Holy shit this is actually pretty good
Great job brazil

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:55:34 No.6104024 Report

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help me write more anyone

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Anonymous ID:oJgwcJdA Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:57:53 No.6104038 Report

Quoted By: >>6104060

>>6103807
Post it in /mu/ and show results, i like it.

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Anonymous ID:IuOnR0CW Sun 05 Aug 2018 20:59:57 No.6104052 Report

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Its gucci my dude

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Anonymous ID:585c7qX+ Sun 05 Aug 2018 21:01:07 No.6104060 Report

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>>6104038
they hate me there

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Anonymous ID:MZSg/UWk Sun 05 Aug 2018 22:47:53 No.6104705 Report

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>>6103807
Not bad at all. "Unplugged sound" suits it well, I think.

Yea I can see how /mu/ jerks would hate you. They hate everyone with voice and guitar.

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Anonymous ID:iq3fqltA Sun 05 Aug 2018 22:54:20 No.6104741 Report

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>>6103807
It's cool, keep up the writing. It may not be *the one*, but that doesn't really matter. *The one* is only going to be created after a large amount of horseshit.

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