Hey bros, I'm on my knees asking for your help in giving me your honest input on a text I'm about to send my ex girlfriend.

>she dumped me last August
>we had on-and-off arguing that lasted until December. Haven't spoken since.

I want to send this text today:

"Hey, it's Riley S. - Ah would you be cool in later meeting up for an update?

It feels like half my soul disappears whenever memories from last Fall pop up...We helped write a page in each other's life story, but I'd love to meet up to rewrite a better ending, please..SO much to update, holy shit!!

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=wTa14Sui7mw&feature=youtu.be&t=4m39s";