Hey /bant/ I can't really get to sleep and I have classes tomorrow. I'd like to share with you one of the latest chapters I wrote for my work. I'm currently 31k words in but today a number of ideas sprung to my mind so I guess I'll be able to get down 10k more words soon. Sissy said I have improved a great deal but I still want to have some more criticism whether good or bad:
https://pastebin.com/VqSTegeH