>>9436066oh man please do not actually worry about it, i am mostly just being an asshole because i dont really like you so im really just finding anything i can to shit on you. in all seriousness though, you play well and your piece is nice to listen to, but if im going to be dickishly technical and critical it does sound like you are "unsure" of yourself at some parts or unpracticed where it noticeably slows down a bit and then you're like "oh yeah, got it, now we're back" and then you catch back up to your regular tempo. again this is more me just being a dickhead rather than an actual criticism of your composition or performance.
i genuinely mean it when i say you did a good job, and its actually cool to hear some more music stuff on /bant/ again so well done. please keep doing stuff like this!