>>2415988>>2416052I´d wager that there are more people who care about stories in this fetish than in most others, as the context that the ENF is in can be more enjoyable than a random image of a naked and blushing woman, so yeah, go for it. Grammatically, your stories are already better than half the porn stories on the web. I liked both characters, and while the second story is more cohesive, I like the first one better because of its more embarrassing ending for the heroine.
You should keep writing, any criticism I have feels more like a nitpick or personal preference than actual criticism.