Requesting someone thin out and darken the linework on the panties so it's consistent with the original linework.
Please also make the crease going across her crotch thinner and not overlapping the edges of her panties. And make her mons less fat- the right side of the crotch area bulges out too much (if you don't know what I mean, I circled it here:
https://files.catbox.moe/18mocz.jpg)