To the anon that was writing that magical girl night lotus story, I finally got around to reading through your latest entry and I think it's great and I hope you continue.
Some feedback:
- The world building is nice, it draws things out a bit too much but the tradeoff is it really fleshes things out. It's a lot to read through, some visuals would go a long way to simplify descriptions imo.
- I find the idea of having to insert Emots kind of gross, especially when it's between girls. It does add some nice enf situations and potential but I'd prefer if in this world they could just absorb them like magic manipulators.
- I really loved how you set it up for how clothes are destroyed partially if they're wearing them when they transform, and that enf situation where she had to run around the park in just a hoodie was fantastic.
- The twist with Tiffany was a nice surprise, I thought she was hypnotized and forced to take the pics before I finally realized it, such a nice turn for things to take.
- That her trigger to develop her powers seems to be enf is great. It would be interesting if that was specific to just her or if that applies to all magical girls in this world, and that because they get used to their nudity they don't get as powerful as quickly. I'd love to see more instances of her being put into enf situations, sometimes even intentionally to grow her powers.
- That seems to be a common theme in the story, some really neat ideas for potential enf situations are laid out but the ratio of potential enf situations to the actual enf situations that happen feels off.
- I don't think enf always needs a male viewer but I think it really adds more to the embarrassment, and it seems like most enf moments so far have been with other magical girls that don't really care about nudity that much. I feel like that takes the wind a bit out of the sails.
Anyway thanks for writing what you did so far!
>>2461786based iwara playlist, tons of videos to go through
