>>2723996Yeah, it really sucks that puns don't translate very well. What's the general thrust of the direct translation? We might be able to salvage it with a sufficient quantity of translator notes in the margins. If not, the improv script at least feels like it fits the pictures, so no worries if we do have to use it.
And I ran out of time before finishing page 11, so that's a tomorrow thing. See ya then!
