>>1612956And that's done. Sorry for the general lack of lewd in the final part. My original plan was actually for Saki to come home on her own... and for Mitsuo to be there, seeing her in her birthday suit. Seemed a bit inappropriate with Kanami in tow (though I did think about it).
I was also planning on writing out Saki's little "Marshmallow Dream", but considering the length I decided to just mention it offhand.
Also, if we had let Kanami go home on her own... at night, we probably wouldn't have seen her at school/the police station. Perhaps I should have went there anyway, to show that despite everything the Rugby team isn't giving up that easily.
Any other questions or comments? I'll probably post some of my other story ideas later.
>>1612957Yeah, I did a bit of a bad job bringing that into play, sadly.
