>>2487185Looks like there were more facial expressions this time around, and you're playing around with physics and clothing states, so it's probably a pretty useful learning vid.
I'm going to guess that the grid floor and the xyz lines were not supposed to be in there and just didn't get turned off before the render. I'm also not sure if the site was being weird or if the framerate is unsteady on this one for some reason.
I think the model and the little facial emotions you threw in were good throughout, but the camera work seemed a bit off in this one. Most of the time it was pretty good, but there were sequences where there were so many cuts and changes in panning direction in close succession that it became distracting. I also maintain that your cuts and zoom ins should have a purpose such as showing off advances in the scenario. The focus in several shots towards the middle ended up on background elements behind the model, or on different aspects of her jacket, rather than on her embarrassment, or body.
Again, the fact that you are making new stuff at all is enough to garner some praise, and it seems like you enjoy making these so please continue to have fun. Hopefully you can take some of the stuff you learned in this vid and put it towards making the next one better.