>>2900129>try to avoid variable size brushes, make the lines look amateurish, just stick with constant size brushes for ecchi>use less shading, looks like you probably usually draw real life figures which doesn't translate to ecchi, you can get away with flatter colours and sometimes less shading is better.> work on the likeness, probably the most important thing of the image is the face, even in porn> very smooth curvy lines all over the body make them look a bit lumpy and unnatural, try using straighter lines more. my redraw is far from perfect too, i would have worked on the proportions of the torso and legs a little more. all that being said
>nice tits, keep up the good workdrawing is decent, only giving critiques since you asked for them, you will improve in no time
