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>>2713738Let's modify: "And from now on, you're cursed to always be a..."
to
"And from now on, you're cursed to always..."
And to make it all fit:
"You will live a life with the strength of your average town girl" will be changed to:
"Live your life with the strength of your average town girl"
Hope that makes sense.
Now, moving on to page 16:
TOP RIGHT:
"Oh, my... I overspoke."
TOP LEFT:
"Hah!
You're damn right you did!"
"In that case..."
MID:
"I'm a girl!" (in quotation marks; Chris doesn't really mean it and the author is trying to make it clear).
"Since I said it, it has to let me go!"
BOTTOM RIGHT:
"Yes!"
BOTTOM MID-RIGHT' WHERE THE WITCH IS LAUGHING:
Witch: "Ah, ha, ha, ha!"
Witch: "I'm afraid I got you now!" (sounds a little more casual than her usual speech, but we can just keep it in her usual 'tone' for consistency).
Chris: "Huh?"
