>>2701679That was a fun read, lots of good moments throughout, thanks for sharing.
I want to give my thoughts on one thing, I would have liked to see the Cremia arc played out just a bit more, where Linkle has managed to wear her clothes . As it is, Cremia just strips them off Linkle when she returns to her at the farm, but that means Cremia basically just sat at home the whole time and nobody saw her, boo!
It would have been interesting to see Cremia do the milk delivery naked, maybe it could have been arranged so Linkle at some point takes fire damage and it burns her clothes to ash completely (like the wooden shield), or maybe they get so war torn (they're farm clothes not adventure clothes after all) that she can't wear them anymore, and the next time she uses the song of time they're lost completely like her tunic, so both Cremia and Linkle are now stuck naked.
So the next timeline comes around and Linkle goes back to Romani Ranch, and Romani leads her into the house, calls out to Cremia to come down, and Cremia is amazed that someone else is stuck in the exact same situation. She vocalizes that she suspects it's some magic prankster playing a trick on them, while Linkle awkwardly just goes "erm, yeah, probably that" because she knows she's responsible for all of it.
Then that continues and eventually leads to Linkle and Cremia reluctantly going on the milk delivery naked, the bandits get an eyeful, and a few people in Clocktown see them covering themselves on the wagon. They eventually reach their destination and Cremia hops off and covers herself, goes to pickup a milk jug and holds it infront of her for cover while she moves it to the drop off point, and Linkle does the same to help. A passerby walks from behind a house and sees they're completely naked from behind and gasps, this startles Cremia and she trips over, losing grip of the jug, so she reaches out to save it from cracking but in the process, she ends up exposing herself completely.
