>>1547433Pretty good. If I were to give it any criticism though, it wouldn't be that it was too wordy, but there wasn't much on the panels beside the words. I can understand why you did it, but personally, I would have liked it to be a bit more /h/, simply because stradling the line between /e/ and /h/ content like that didn't leave a huge amount of content per panel during the best parts other than the guys chest and the top of her head, though that's just me, and I can understand why what with board rules and everything. As it stands, my favourites from you are still Beach Day and All Grown Up, but that's mostly because Yomiko is my favourite of yours, so I'm bias.
Anyways, I've added a few new girls to my cast, and with the free time I have, am currently thinking of doing a new set...
