>>1881931Your shape on pose are a good start, but theres a few issue that throw everything off.
-There isn't enough perpective, esspecially in the arms. Looks ltoo much like flat human shpaes ontop of other flat human shapes.
-Don't skimp on the detail in the hair. It may be hard to figure out, but the way the hair sits and move on the body can really help define the 3d shape.
-Additionally the shape of the hair makes her head look squished
-She doesn't look like she has a neck. Define the shape of the neck better.
-I thnk her hips look slightly mishappen. Think about the shape of the pelvic bone, where the spine is going and shere the meat sits on the bone.
In the future I would try to get out of the habit of making looks of little lines wher you are having trouble making the right curves. Actually practice doing those lines right in one even stroke, moving from the elbow and the shoulder instead of teh wrist. It really helps. It will really help you with your line weight will help you with you perpective.
Looking at it again, I think the arms might have ended up looking funny becasue you tried to conform the shape of the arm to fit the shape of the boob, instead of the other way around. Think about what parts of the body are maliable and which are not.
