>>1606627Well, in that case I want to say don't be too hard on yourself. As far as Junko's story went in your case, I feel it didn't have a chance to really GET to the real ENF. Some stories strip a girl nude before the story even starts, and others make it a slow agonizing decent into humiliation. I saw yours going towards the latter.
Anyway, I say do whatever is more comfortable to you. You're writing things of your own accord and /e/ really doesn't owe you anything. If you don't feel you're cut out for Junko's story (or even Time Trials), then don't worry about it.