>>2729501>>2729115>>2729416Thanks for the breakdown of your thought process! You're right, if the original text is weird and jarring then you've been making good choices for her english dialogue. If later chapters reframe how we look at her, well, changing text is very easy to do.
But yeah, that's Chapter 5 done! I'll look over it all again tomorrow, see if there's any fixes that need doing, and then upload it.
I'm kinda hyped to see Virtesla again in Chapter 6 (presumably). She really livens up the story.
