>>2320824In addition to the core edits requested, if any of these can be done that'd be great:
>remove headband/make it white>make her entire outfit white, ribbons, thigh band, shoes>better yet remove shoes and make her barefootAnd if you can give her rear-perspective drawing a slightly smug, embarrassed smile, and have her saying 「…そこまで気に入ったか?」that'd be the cherry on top.