>>1884515Ok, so first, you did much better on the hair this time! It really conforms to her head. The other person who said the shape of the head was a bit too oval was correct. This isn't the best way of explaining this, but I tried. I also tried to keep to the feel of your art with the head shape, and the actual features and hair are your own work, just traced and re-positioned. (Sorry for how it ended up looking, but i hope it gives you an idea of what PP meant).
I would add too that the boobs on your works need to sit a little lower on the ribs.
